(四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲，具体到某些点的，有些英语佳句进去更好！谢（英语写信的范文_书信优秀作文？）

引用

东方 的 【考试信息】2010年6月份大学英语四级考试作文最新预测--校园安全与生活压力

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注

2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求提供解决办法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题，校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。

【参考范文】

Campus Security

Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。

In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。(总结观点段)

一篇关于校园治安，校园安全的英语作文

Electric door guard sparks debate (CRI)

The electric door guard has replaced the traditional "door lady" in a dormitory at Shanghai Songjiang University City, within the range of many universities.

In the future, more electric door guards will take the place of "door ladies."

The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding student's name, major, grade, and even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a "digital eye" to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week.

With the new "door guard" already on duty, students began to discuss the pros and cons of the latest renovation to their dorm in community forums.

Some complained that having to take their IC card everywhere is inconvenient, adding that the system is not always reliable. They noted times when the system failed to recognize them and they had to call repair workers to fix it.

Others say the former "door lady" was more flexible and gave them a sense of "home." Sometimes when a student had to stay out late, to study or for other business, the door lady would wait for them and let them in if they told her beforehand. Or when students' parents came to visit, the door lady would let them in. But now, all of these conveniences seem impossible.

Still, students admit that the electric door guard is much safer, as it prevents thieves as well as unwelcome salesmen from entering their dorm. In this way, the electric door guard has its own advantages.

The school's authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the inconveniences brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to be good for students living in the dorm building.

本文来自作文地带:

跟最近那些在校园发生的事有关的英语作文，字数略少，大家自己补齐!

Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.

Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.

From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,

Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生

2. 物品被盗的原因

3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

审题概述�

这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】

l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

第一段思路点评：

陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

语言点提示：

it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

第二段思路点评：

说明被盗原因

语言点提示：

(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

第三段思路点评：

阐述如何加强防盗意识

语言点提示：

注意关联词语in the first place，besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

你是否有用过英语来写书信给自己的家人或者朋友呢?是否能够得心应手地写出来呢?下面是我带来英语写信的优秀范文，以供大家学习参考。

英语写信优秀范文篇1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestion given below in Chinese:

1. 表示欢迎

2. 提出对度假安排的建议

3. 提醒应注意的事项

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 23, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

__________________________________

__________________________________

__________________________________.

Yours,

Zhang Ying

从上面的例子可见，书信作文不仅给出正文部分的内容的提纲，而且还给出书信各部分的结构的框架。也就是说，我们只要考虑如何表达提纲部分的内容，而不用考虑书信的结构。

在写书信作文时，首先要把书信正文的提纲内容细化，扩充套件成更细的英文提纲，然后用简洁、明了、礼貌、正确和得体的语言表达出细化了的提纲内容。例如前面的那封信就可以列出下面的提纲：

Topic: A Letter to a SchoolmateQuestion: What are the holiday arrangements and points for attention?

Outline:I. Extending my weleII. Holiday schedule1. 1st day – campus2. 2nd day – the art gallery & music hall3. 3rd day – mountain climbing4. next 3 days – other places of interest Swan Cave, Golden Lake …5. Last day -- departureIII. Points for attention1. Train number & time of arrival2. SunglassesIV. Looking forward to seeing you.Introduction Body 1Body 2Conclusion

范文：

A Letter to A Schoolmate

June 23, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I’m very glad to learn that you’re going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My parents will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.

I have arranged our schedule for the holiday as follows. On the first day you arrive, I’ll show you around our campus. On the second day, we’ll visit the art gallery and the music hall. Next day, we’ll climb a hill in the northeastern part of the city. On the top of the hill, we can have a wonderful bird’s eye view of the city. During the next three days, we’ll make some short trips to some places of interest nearby, such as the Swan Cave, the Golden Lake, etc. On the last day, I’ll see you off at the railway station.

Please remember to call and tell me your train number and time of arrival so that I can meet you at the railway station. By the way, it’s very hot here and we have a lot of sunshine, so don’t forget to wear you sunglasses.

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Ying

写信日期称呼正文第一段：表示欢迎正文第2段：活动安排第一天的安排第二天的安排第三天的安排第4-6天的安排第七天：送行正文第三段注意事项： 注意事项一注意事项二结束语结尾礼词签名

上面举的是私人信件的例子，下面我们再来看一封投诉信Letter of plaint。

投诉信的目的是为了让收信人读信后同情你的遭遇,解决你所遇到的问题。所以写投诉信时应该实事求是地反映情况，注意措辞，不使用过多的讽刺或责备的语言，也不要因为发泄怒气而离题，以避免引起收信人的不信任或反感。

一般而言，投诉信包括以下内容：提出要求和理由;解释详细的情况;把请求具体化以及希望收信人采取行动的日期等。例如：

September 1, 2001

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to plain about a typewriter I bought seven months ago.

In February of 2001 I bought a Jones Typewriter, Portable Special Model, at ABC Store, I had used it only a few days when the space bar broke.

I took it to a local shop, they told me it was factory defect and suggest I take it back to ABC. ABC accepted the machine and sent the part in. I waited three months, and since your pany did not send a replacement, they let me have the space bar from another typewriter.

Now, six months later, it has broken again. I took it back to ABC. They are no longer carrying your typewriter, but they assured me that the guarantee is still good and suggested that I write you for further instructions as to what steps to take.

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us on this matter.

Respectfully,

Signature

James Bergen

写信日期 称呼正文第一段：表明写信的目的正文第二段：具体说明购买产品的时间、地点及出现的问题第三段：说明尝试的解决方法 第四段：说明尝试的解决方案无效，请求帮助结尾礼词签名列印的姓名

这是一封态度冷静、措辞有理、有节的投诉售后服务不周的信。由于这类信涉及经销商厂家和卖方，因此，投诉信中写明了以下详细的情况：

1 购物的时间：In February of 2001

2 购物地点： at ABC Store

3 产品型号：Jones Typewriter, Portable Special Model

4 使用时间：I had used it only a few days;six months later

5 主要问题：The space bar broke

6 产生问题的原因：factory defect

7 为什么向你方反映：

They are no longer carrying your typewriter, but they assured us that the guarantee is still good and suggested that I write you for further instructions as to what steps to take. 商店已没有贵公司的打字机，但他们让我相信，保修卡仍有效，并建议我写信给贵公司以寻求解决办法

此外，写信人还用了礼貌的结束语：

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us on this matter. 贵公司在这件事上给我的任何帮助都将令我不胜感激

小结：1英文书信的结构;2书信作文的出题形式;3书信作文的写作要领。

下面我们进行写作练习。我将给大家一个作文题，请大家根据这一讲的内容，在30分钟内完成。大家在写作的过程中要注意审题，考虑文章的结构、采用的起首语和结束语等。

英语写信优秀范文篇2

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Xiao Li. Write a letter to Xiao Zhang, a roommate of yours who is a heavy *** oker. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestion given below in Chinese:

1. 吸菸已成为宿舍的一大问题

2. 吸菸的危害

3. 建议戒菸

A Letter to a Roommate

March 16, 2002

Dear Xiao Zhang,

_______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

______________________________________________________.

Yours sincerely,

Xiao Li

参考文章:

A Letter to a Roommate

March 16, 2002

Dear Xiao Zhang,

Recently I have noticed that you have been *** oking heavily, which is being a serious problem. As long as you are in, our bedroom is filled with that terrible *** ell. The ashtray always overflows with cigarette butts.

Your are ruining your health, destroying brain cells which can never be replaced, not to mention the damage to your lungs and windpipes. Smoking, especially heavy *** oking, correlates highly with lung cancer. It is possible that you'll be caught up with it. I'm not scaring you. Besides, *** oking is also harmful to the health of our roommates and the friendship among us. The roommates avoid being in the bedroom for fear of being polluted. As a result, the brotherhood among roommates is gradually fading.

If I were you, I would try to get rid of the bad habit. It is not difficult to break away from it if you are really determined to quit. Remember 'Where there is a will, there is a way'. I will always be there to help, if you need.

Yours sincerely,

Xiao Li

英语四级书信写作常用套句

It is so great to hear from you again.

It is a great pleasure for me to …

With great delight I learned that …

I must apologize for not writing to you sooner.

建议：炎炎英文培训网

In my experience, it seems that _______ would make sense in your situation

In my opinion, it would be wise for you to take the following actions:

感谢：

I truly appreciate your kindness.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for...

道歉：

I apologize most sincerely for...

I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble...

邀请：

We would be honored to have you there with us...

I will cover all the expense involved.

抱怨：

I very much regret to have to inform you that...

We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss

I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible

咨询：

I would like to request some information about...

Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.

求职：

In anwser to your advertisement a post as … in your office.

I hope I may be granted an interview…

提纲式作文是历年四、六级考试中最常见的题型。从1995年1月到1999年1月9次四级考试的作文题型都是这种形式。它要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达提纲的主旨。它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大体的内容，为考生提供了一条思路，稍加思索、计划、整理就可成文。但缺点是如果审题不当，反而容易丢分。另外，它的限定性较大，不理解提纲所展现的内容或词汇，就会感到难以下笔。

一、写作步骤和技巧：

1写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。

2每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次，段落的展开围绕提纲的中心和内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。

3提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。这需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。

4收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，即要“扣题”。同时要具有典型性，能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。

二、审题和构思：

根据下题写一篇不少于100词的作文：

my view on job-hopping

1)有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为……

2)有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为……

3)我的看法

显而易见，这是一道提纲式的作文题。可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文：



1.分析题目和提纲可知，应该写一篇说明文，当然其中可以夹有议论。要写出“不换工作”和“换工作”的原因，然后给出自己的看法，重点是原因和看法。

2.根据提纲，文章可分3段，第1段是“喜欢从事一种工作”的原因;第2段写出“喜欢经常换工作”的原因;第3段是“我的”看法。

3.根据以上分析，可以把提纲转换为主题句如下：

some people tend to stick to their position all the time.

some people are different.they are in the habit of job-hopping.

i am not in favour of constant job-hopping.

4.以材料支持各段主题句。第1段的材料可以是：喜欢那份工作的各种原因：有发展前途、工资高等;第2段经常“跳槽”的原因：不能施展自己的才能，谋求更高的收入等。第3段也要说明原因，并总结归纳，圆满结尾。

三、参考范文：

my view on job-hopping

some people tend tostick to their positions all the time，as they think the longer one works in a particular field，the more skillful one will be at it.some have been teachers all their lives.some devote all their energy to scientific research.such people love their work and turn out to be specialists in their own fields.they are usually high achievers.

some are different.they are in the habit of job-hopping，for they always purpose what is new and stimulating.they never seem content with their present situations.they like to meetmore people，make more money and new acquaintances，so they hop from job to job.

as far as i am concerned，i am not in favour of constant job-hopping. i believe in a famous proverb，“a rolling stone gather no moss.”i want to be professionally strong.and i respect those who devote themselves to their affectionate jobs throughout