(四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲，具体到某些点的，有些英语佳句进去更好！谢 绿色校园 英语四级作文

I like the campus swimming pool; I like the campus Shixiang Ting; I like the campus classroom building ... ... but I like the campus green.

Enter the school, I guarantee the first thing you must be: "Good green-ah!" Either spring or autumn and winter, the campus had been keeping alive ... ...

Spring, the campus all seem spring, grass in the rain dance, sing rain roses are also beautiful songs accompanied by children, see friends along for the ride even the birds. Listen, they are on campus for the spring, playing a lively "Chunzhi Ge."

Summer, a dark green campus, the vast sky hung a large fireball, the students sweat the heat, the leaves were bright green, emerald green grass, flowers bright red, and really like the one the world's most beautiful the landscape.

If the campus green spring and summer was fresh, feminine, then the spring and summer while the campus was dark green, vigorous.

Although the leaves began to litter, but they are not dead, will cover up the campus. Woven into a green carpet.

To the winter, leaves begin to disappear, and the entire campus is only a few pieces that will soon litter the leaves. Some may suspect leaves too little, not noticeable, but you thought of it? In the cold winter could see green leaves, Do not you feel the warmth you feel hope? Even though they were cold and frozen the It was also still in the green of the blood flow of life force is still irresistible!

Ah! Good beautiful green world, ah!

引用

东方 的 【考试信息】2010年6月份大学英语四级考试作文最新预测--校园安全与生活压力

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注

2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求提供解决办法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题，校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。

【参考范文】

Campus Security

Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。

In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。(总结观点段)

一篇关于校园治安，校园安全的英语作文

Electric door guard sparks debate (CRI)

The electric door guard has replaced the traditional "door lady" in a dormitory at Shanghai Songjiang University City, within the range of many universities.

In the future, more electric door guards will take the place of "door ladies."

The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding student's name, major, grade, and even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a "digital eye" to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week.

With the new "door guard" already on duty, students began to discuss the pros and cons of the latest renovation to their dorm in community forums.

Some complained that having to take their IC card everywhere is inconvenient, adding that the system is not always reliable. They noted times when the system failed to recognize them and they had to call repair workers to fix it.

Others say the former "door lady" was more flexible and gave them a sense of "home." Sometimes when a student had to stay out late, to study or for other business, the door lady would wait for them and let them in if they told her beforehand. Or when students' parents came to visit, the door lady would let them in. But now, all of these conveniences seem impossible.

Still, students admit that the electric door guard is much safer, as it prevents thieves as well as unwelcome salesmen from entering their dorm. In this way, the electric door guard has its own advantages.

The school's authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the inconveniences brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to be good for students living in the dorm building.

本文来自作文地带:

跟最近那些在校园发生的事有关的英语作文，字数略少，大家自己补齐!

Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.

Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.

From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,

Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生

2. 物品被盗的原因

3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

审题概述�

这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】

l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

第一段思路点评：

陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

语言点提示：

it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

第二段思路点评：

说明被盗原因

语言点提示：

(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

第三段思路点评：

阐述如何加强防盗意识

语言点提示：

注意关联词语in the first place，besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

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本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句+逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变