校园类英语作文讨论校园体育活动的开展，按照四级的格式与要求，写出120个词。（英语四级优秀作文范文）

高中生写的文章居然被引用到四六级，不害臊，我给上面文章的评价是，第一个分论点与观点矛盾，词汇量小，句式变化不多。下面是一篇谈旅游业发展与传统文化冲突的文章，自己比较下吧。

The booming tourist trade has brought about mass exchange of population between different nations. At first glance, this bridges the understanding and communication between different cultures. In my opinion, however, this fast-growing industry has produced tension between people from different cultural background.

The first barrier for curious tourists from all over the world is the problem of language. The most attractive destinations of tourism are, ironically, less developed areas where the world language --- English, has not been prevalent. Therefore, the direct contact between tourists and local residents has been cut down. The tour guide, normally interpreter too, becomes the only link of communication. But unfortunately, as indicated in any guide-training handbook, the responsibility of a tour guide is to arouse the tourists’ interest and passion rather than present a lecture on cultural difference. Thus, tourists, beyond their expectations, cannot fully understand the cultures which appears to be exotic.

Another obstacle is from the local government. As I argue before, in most of case, the ‘local’ refers to the less developed regions. In order to attract foreign investment and maintain the local tourism industry, the officials, deliberately or not, only hope to show outsiders the positive side of the area, hence, the part of local living. As a result, conducted tours are carefully censored. The tourists, or ‘prisoners’ to some extent, are allowed to see only what the organizers want them to see and no more. A window-shop schedule gives no opportunity to wander off on one’s own. In this way, even for a knowledgeable traveler with practical experience can only ‘see’ the superficial of the local culture. If so, an instant misunderstanding will be falsely shaped.

All things considered, the international tourism contributes absolutely nothing to increasing understanding. Instead, in its way as it is today, a hideous prejudice and misinterpretation will be established.

利与弊：

……(用一个从句引出的话题) gradually becomes a pressing/hot-button/controversial/heated issue/opinion . In my point of view , trere are some advantages/strenthens/merits and disadvantages/weakens/shortcommings . In this essay , I want to compare them in several aspects and suggest some actions to take to solve its bad parts .

接下来讲这个问题的几点缺点。(两三个即可)

然后再讲解决方法，要注意有针对性。

最后再结尾，提出一些设想和对未来的展望就可以了。

其实什么模板套句都是没有什么用的，关键是怎么样让作文更有表现力，这是要长期训练的结果。

我可以举个很简单的例子：

非洲国家有很多人正在遭受饥饿、痛苦和贫穷。

高中生可以这样写：

Many people in African coutries are very poor , pain and hungry .(词汇贫乏句式简单，pain用词不恰当)炎炎英文培训网

一般的大学生可以这样写：

Africans are suffering from stavation , misery and poor life .(虽然有一定的词汇，但是没有表现力，很乏味，相信改卷老师看了太多这样的句子了，已经是睡眼惺忪了。)

英语专业的学生就不一样拉，他们寻求表现力：

Stavation , misery and poverty(贫穷) are embracing tens of thousands of residents(居民) living in African coutries .(不简单，不用人做主语，形象生动，句式有些复杂，用现在分词做定语，词汇量大，表现力强。)

所以写作的时候要绞尽脑汁(rack your brain)来想出一些办法增强表现力，但是这是一个长期的过程，不可能一蹴而就的!

大学英语四级写作部分，只有多练才能在考试中写出一篇好的英语文章。下文中特为大家总结了一篇英语四级优秀作文范文，大家可以进行参考借鉴。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Opinion on Campus Lectures. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1、大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩

2、 听讲座的益处

3、你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论

【范文】

My Opinion on Campus Lectures

In recent years, more and more lectures are being given on campus. They are organized either by the departments or by the students unions with an aim to improve the students quality both mentally and academically. These lectures are usually in series and on different topics, such as arts, life, economy, psychology and world issues.

Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various. First they broaden the students knowledge horizon and cultivate interest in different fields. Second, they make the life of the students colorful and enjoyable.

With these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work. If students spend too much time attending lectures, their regular study will be affected and disturbed. So, in my opinion, the students should, on the one hand, do their class work and homework well first, on the other hand, set as more time as possible to attend good lectures which are helpful to our life and study.

尽可能的睁大眼睛，总分460，噢耶，过了!425过四级，想起来复习的日子，厚厚的一本四级单词，还有十套题，其实我没背多少单词，题也只是考前做了几套。但是每天都看一部英文电影，锻炼听力，做题的时候，每个类型题都认真的分析，琢磨。作文也看过很多，这是我第二次考英语四级了，分析第一次的成绩，有听力，阅读，作文和翻译，这三部分我的得分都不高，一百二十多分，总分是358，这次我苦练听力，做阅读的时候也很认真，单词虽然没背完一本，但是也背了百页。

这次成绩比上次提高了一百多分，我也很高兴，也为自己感到自豪，我的作文和翻译部分不好，这次也不例外，听力和阅读都是一百七。

刚刚结束考试的时候感觉答的还不错，但是一想到单词没背完，心里也是没有底。回宿舍以后，室友都在讨论题目，每人的题目不同。室友也都考了，可惜的是算我总共两个人过了。问了问我以前的同学，也没有过，不过她们都是第一次考，还有机会。

在微博里也搜了一下四级，看到很多人发的都是四级，当然还有六级，如果时间充足，我也把六级过了，以后成为英语老师也是可以的，哈哈，加油。

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