12月四级作文分析之沟通方式改变 (四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲，具体到某些点的，有些英语佳句进去更好！谢

2020年12月

四级作文

分析之沟通方式改变：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Communication. You should write at least 120 words but no

more than

180 words.

首先，通过仔细审题发现，今年12月份的四级作文真题之一是一篇比较典型的

议论文

写作，根据所给的文字提纲，我们需要写的话题是“沟通方式的改变”。

其次，确定为议论文之后，我们需要就这一主题，联系我们现代社会的交流和通讯方式所发生的变化，形成我们基本的写作思路。字数要求为120 -180字的议论文，我们可以采取总分总的结构，分为三段。

第一段为现象的陈述，叙述由于

互联网技术

的发展和手机的普及，越来越多的人开始依赖互联网和手机进行交流沟通， 越来越忽略面对面交流。

第二段可以展开讨论这种沟通方式的改变，也就是利用手机和互联网交流的积极和消极的影响。从积极方面来说，线上交流拉近了人们之间的关系，通过即时的通讯，人们可以随时随地沟通和交流，哪怕是距离遥远的朋友和亲人。从消极方面来说，一部分人会沉溺于线上交流，而忽略了面对面的交流，忽略了和身边人的情感交流。交流通讯方式的改变给人们带来了疏远感。

第三段我们可以承认通讯方式的改变给我们带来了好处，同时提出不应该忽略新的交流方式产生的消极影响。建议人们应该更重视面对面交流。

总体上来说，议论文的正反讨论有助于我们在写作过程中更全面地表达自己的观点，在结尾段承认和进一步发展的好处，针对消极影响提出建议。

范文

Nowadays, great changes have taken place in the way of communication. With the continuous advancement of science and technology, the mobile phone has become an indispensable tool in our daily life. People in mounting numbers indulge in the communication through mobile phones, becoming increasingly unaware of face-to-face communication and estranged from each other.

On the one hand, undoubtedly, online communication through the mobile phone and internet provides us with considerable convenience and enables us to be closer than ever before. For example, it is easier to for us to keep in touch with far-away friends and relatives. On the other hand, our reliance on mobile phones has negative effects on our personal life. People are so addicted to online communication that they ignore face-to-face communication. Although scientific and technological advancement brings us a number of benefits, it has provoked a sense of alienation among people.

In conclusion, enjoying the convenience provided by the new way of communication, we should bear in mind that human beings are social beings who need real interpersonal interactions. Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication.

2020年12月四级作文分析之沟通方式改变小编就说到这里了，更多关于

大学英语四级考试

备考技巧，备考干货，新闻资讯，成绩查询，英语四级准考证打印入口，准考证打印时间等内容，小编会持续更新。祝愿各位考生都能取得满意的成绩。

[范文]

changes in people‘s diet

as can be seen in the table， there have been great changes in people‘s diet in the past five years. grain used to be the chinese main food， but now it is playing a less important role in peoples diet， while the consumption of some highenergy foods， such as milk and meat， has increased steadily.

what caused these changes? i think the reasons are as follows: first,the open policy brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money.second,people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet.they are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health.

from the above， we can see that，with the development of the country，the level of the chinese people‘s life has changed in the past five years.i’m sure there will be greater changes in the future.

文中第一句话就明确告诉读者这篇作文是一篇图表作文。接下来根据图表分析了在过去的五年中人们的饮食结构都发生了哪些变化，最后预测将来人们的生活水平还会发生更大的变化。尽管在这张图表中有很多数据，但作者并没有过多地引用这些数据，而是通过数据把要说明的问题点了出来。

[例2]directions： for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on income sources between chinese and american students.study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the in formation given in the table. write three paragraphs to：

1. describe the differences of the income sources between chinese and american students.

2. analyze possible reasons for these differences.

3. predicate future tendency.

[范文]

income sources between chinese students and american students

income sources of chinese students are quite different from those of american students. in china, students get 90% of their money from their parents while in america, only 50% of students` money is provided by parents. in addition, chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for american students takes up 35% and 15% respectively of their total income.

i think there are probably three reasons for their differences. first， because of the influence of different social and family values，chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while american students have developed more sense of being financially independent. second， most chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their childrens education rather than encourage them to take parttime jobs.but in america， many parents pay more attention to developing the students ability of selfreliance，so they encourage their children to find parttime job to earn some money by themselves. third， since america is more developed than china，it is relatively easy for students to find parttime jobs.in china，such opportunities are rather rare.

i believe with the development of china， more and more chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity of selfdependence. in addition， more and more opportunities will be provided for them to take parttime jobs. so more students will go out of the ivory tower to broaden their knowledge and to become the master of their own lives.

作者在这篇图表作文中很好地利用了图表以及题目中所给的提示，文章结构完整，意思表达清楚，较好地完成了一篇图表作文所应该表达的内容。

第五节命题作文

命题作文要求就所给的作文题目进行写作。与其他作文相比，命题作文具有较大的自主性。因为同样的一个题目可以从不同的角度、用不同的文体来进行写作。例如“my teacher”这个题目可以写成一篇记叙文，也可以写成一篇描写文。不管用什么文体，也不管从哪个方面来写，只要写出的文章切题、流畅、条理清楚、语言正确就是一篇好文章。然而，这种较大的自主性也会使考生感到困难。因为在有限的30分钟之内，要形成提纲，并写成短文并不是件易事。这就要求考生在写命题作文时首先一定要审好题，要仔细分析题意，搞清楚题目所涉及的范围，确定文章的中心思想，切忌跑题。再者，要选择正确的文体。最后，要围绕文章的中心思想，将写作素材进行分析、归类并写好写作提纲，包括：引言句、主题句和结尾句。

引用

东方 的 【考试信息】2010年6月份大学英语四级考试作文最新预测--校园安全与生活压力

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注

2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求提供解决办法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题，校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。

【参考范文】

Campus Security

Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。

In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。(总结观点段)

一篇关于校园治安，校园安全的英语作文

Electric door guard sparks debate (CRI)

The electric door guard has replaced the traditional "door lady" in a dormitory at Shanghai Songjiang University City, within the range of many universities.

In the future, more electric door guards will take the place of "door ladies."

The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding student's name, major, grade, and even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a "digital eye" to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week.

With the new "door guard" already on duty, students began to discuss the pros and cons of the latest renovation to their dorm in community forums.

Some complained that having to take their IC card everywhere is inconvenient, adding that the system is not always reliable. They noted times when the system failed to recognize them and they had to call repair workers to fix it.

Others say the former "door lady" was more flexible and gave them a sense of "home." Sometimes when a student had to stay out late, to study or for other business, the door lady would wait for them and let them in if they told her beforehand. Or when students' parents came to visit, the door lady would let them in. But now, all of these conveniences seem impossible.

Still, students admit that the electric door guard is much safer, as it prevents thieves as well as unwelcome salesmen from entering their dorm. In this way, the electric door guard has its own advantages.

The school's authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the inconveniences brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to be good for students living in the dorm building.

本文来自作文地带:

跟最近那些在校园发生的事有关的英语作文，字数略少，大家自己补齐!

Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.

Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.

From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,

Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生炎炎英文培训网

2. 物品被盗的原因

3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

审题概述�

这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】

l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

第一段思路点评：

陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

语言点提示：

it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

第二段思路点评：

说明被盗原因

语言点提示：

(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

第三段思路点评：

阐述如何加强防盗意识

语言点提示：

注意关联词语in the first place，besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。