英语四级作文万能句型 谢谢，非常感谢 12月大学英语四级作文高分范文

我是同济大学的在校生，像英语这类的课程应该比较提高(当然，英语是我初高中时候最有把握的一门课，在高手如林的重点高中，英语卷面成绩第一总能帮我拉一拉总分)，只要你真的花时间了，肯定可以较快提高，这一些心得体会我已经跟很多人分享过了(通过交谈、邮件、百度知道)，所以我的学习经验真的是“复制..复制..再复制.”如果你觉得靠谱的话就去试试吧，希望对你也有所帮助。我们今天就讲讲作文的写法。

关于模板的使用，超级同意楼上“流星锤蜘蛛”的看法，因为我一直这么用，高二的时候用，征服了老师的审美，高三的时候用，高考获得成功，四六级还用，作文成为我的优势。考研我还打算用!

【英语作文的考试重点】

初高中的英语作文重在展现你自己的水平：1.语法，尽可能不出现语法错误。2.书写，书写尽量工整，这个一方面能够让老师看得舒服，另一方面也表明了你写作的思路流畅。3.从句、长句、优美的句子、高级词汇的灵活运用。

【万金油句子举例】

1.___has been brought into focus,and ____ always aroused the greatest concern

2.Among the various reasons contributing to this phonomenon, ____ plays an important part.

3.There is no complete agreement among people as to ____ .Some people take it for granted that _____________ while others hold the opinion that ___________ .

4.Taking above metioned factors into consideration, I think ________炎炎英文培训网

5.In a whole, ___________

【提高的方法】

我高二的时候买了一本书《王长喜十句作文法》讲的是关于四六级考试的，应用优美的模板来写作的技巧(说实在的这个有点儿投机取巧，但是应对考试绰绰有余)。我分析了一下平时的考卷，发现作文的题材有六七成都和里面所介绍的五种相关，我就把他里面提供的相同题材的几个不同模板做了一下整理，每种题材整理出一个我自认为最完美的模板(模板中不乏显摆自己高超语法技巧的闪光点)然后每一次考试尽量套上一个适合的模板，结果是十有八九我的作文会成为范文之一。

所以，建议你买一本类似于模板的书，这种书市面上现在很多的，不仅是王长喜的，其他的也有。你现在要万金油句子你也不一定会运用得很自然甚至巧妙，因此，整理出几套模板，然后就这几套模板好好看一些优秀的例文。相信不久你的作文水平会得到很大的提升

真希望说了这么多对你有实质性的帮助，加油啊，期待你如愿以偿，加油!

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1.2021年12月大学英语四级作文高分范文

作文题目：节食

Students, especially girls, often like to lose weight by eating less or taking different kinds of medicine. Dieting has become an obsession for some people. What is your opinion about this obsession with dieting?

作文范文Preventing an Obsession with Dieting

I believe the craving some young women have to copy what is promoted as the ideal figure for a woman is the cause of their obsession with excessive dieting. A great deal of media advertising makes use of young, slim, attractive women and it is understandably natural that some women want to copy what they see as the ideal role model.

Obsessive dieting certainly does happen, as is illustrated by the numerous articles in magazines about people suffering from anorexia. Almost exclusively, this obsession relates to younger women who are constantly bombarded with the supposedly ideal woman as depicted in women's fashion magazines, Most of these fashion models are very slim, some of them excessively so. There is nothing wrong with a sensible controlled diet aimed at losing some excess weight but, when the need to diet becomes an allconsuming passions, that is when the danger occurs. Often, the people who become susceptible to the lure of the "perfect" figure are not aware of what is happening to them. Usually, preventing dieting becoming an obsession will depend on friends and relatives recognising the warning signs. As for preventing the basic cause of this problem, that is a much more complex issue as it involves the standard mores of the society and people being aware of their responsibilities. Education about the dangers of excessive dieting needs to be part of the solution for prevention.

In conclusion, an obsession with dieting can be prevented by friends and relatives of the dieter as well as an education campaign about the dangers of excessive dieting. (261 words)

2.2021年12月大学英语四级作文高分范文

写作题目：责任

On May 12, 2008, Fan Meizhong, a teacher at Guangya School in Dujiangyan, revealed he had fled his classroom during the earthquake leaving his students behind. Some people say that he lacked responsibility to his students while others say he had a right to save his own life first. What is your opinion about this?

写作范文Teachers Should Put Students First

"Runner Fan", nickname of Fan Meizhong, who ran out of the classroom leaving his students behind during the May 12 earthquake, has caused a controversy concerning traditional Chinese values. Many people regard his action as wrong and a direct violation of teachers' responsibility and I would have to agree with them.

Firstly, it is the responsibility of a teacher to protect his students' safety by law. Being concerned solely fol his own life and leaving his students behind while fleeing violates the spirit of the law. In an emergency, each teacher is responsible for the direct supervision of his students. Furthermore, it will be of great help if they can direct the evacuation of their students to designated assembly areas in accordance with warning signals and written notification. It is out of the question that they should not remain with their students until rescue crews arrive. Secondly, teachers act as a role model for their students. The Compulsory Education Law does stipulate that “a teacher should be a model of virtue for others and should be devoted to the education of the people." Teachers not only teach students how to think, but also how to behave to support others in society. Fleeing the classroom and leaving the students behind in an emergency sets a bad example for students.

3.2021年12月大学英语四级作文高分范文

写作题目：献血

Many university students donate blood because they either get marks or benefit in some other way while others see it as helping others in need. Do you think that students should get something in return for donating blood?

写作范文Universities Should Reward Blood Donors

Should university students be rewarded for donating blood or should they do it out of altruistic reasons? As far as I am concerned, I believe that students should not make the donation merely in order to obtain rewards. Yet, institutions ought to devise some incentives to promote blood donation.

To begin with, the act in question is to help or even save the lives of people in need. In view of the notion that prize and punishment should be meted out accordingly, donors should be rewarded for their selflessness. Second, the implementation of various incentives also serves to encourage students to donate blood. As the saying goes, "One good turn deserves another." Even if donors do demand some repayment, it is utterly justified. Meanwhile, the establishment of the incentive policy also reinforces an advantageous societal system where good deeds are encouraged. Nevertheless, the foregoing points do not justify able-bodied students eschewing blood donation if no rewards are offered. Otherwise, our world would be replete with mercenary individuals; and no society can survive let alone thrive when it is corrupted with selfishness.

In the final analysis, students should make donations in an altruistic fashion".However, universities ought to present some rewards to express their gratitude. (205 words)

【 #四六级考试# 导语】生活中，我们每天都在尝试中，我们走向成功，品味失败，走过心灵的阴雨晴空。运动员们，不要放弃尝试，无论失败与否，重要的是你勇于参与的精神，付出的背后是胜利。无论是否成功，我们永远赞美你，你们永远是我们的骄傲。以下是 为大家精心整理的内容，欢迎大家阅读。

1.2022年12月大学英语四级作文万能模板

题目要求：

Directions: Write a composition entitled Telling Lies. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 人们对说谎通常的看法;

2. 是否说谎都是有害的?说明你的看法。

3. 总结全文。

参考范文：

Sample:

Telling Lies

Telling lies is usually looked upon as an evil, because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults.

However,_I_thinkdespitejits_neg1ative_effects,jsometimes_itjisjessentialto iemigsinour_dailylifei First, the liar may benefit from the lie by escaping from the pressure of unnecessary embarrassment. Meanwhile, the listener may also feel more comfortable by reasonable excuses. For example, if a little girl’s father died in an accident, her mother would comfort her by saying “farther has gone to another beautiful land”. In such cases, a lie with original goodwill can make the cruel nice. Second^thejsk^lsjofJtellingJlies^jtojsome extent,canbe_regard_asja_capacity_ofcreationandjimagination.

Therefore,jtakingjallJthese_factor^jntojconsideration,_wecandefinitely come to the conclusion that whether telling a lie is harmful depends on its original intention and the ultimate result it brings. (159 words)

2.2022年12月大学英语四级作文万能模板

题目要求：

1. 近年来出现一些教育不公平的现象

2. 出现这些现象的原因和后果

3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为……

参考范文：

Sample:

Equality of Education Opportunity

In recent years the problems which are caused by the inequality of education opportunity have attracted the public's attention. For instance, the backward teaching facilities and dilapidated school buildings in rural areas are in sharp contrast to those advanced facilities and well-equipped classrooms in urban areas, students from poor families cannot go to universities because of the high tuition.

There are several factors which contribute lo these problems. First, the distribution of resources is unbalanced between rural and urban schools. Second, educational loans for poor students are far from enough. Third, the inequality in some schools' admission policies also turns many students away. The education inequality can result in many bad impacts. On one hand, it can affect people’s future employment. On the other hand，it is the root of many social problems.

To change this situation, I think, we should take the following measures. Firstly, the government's spending on education should be increased and the allocation of public resources gives priority to rural and weak urban schools. Secondly, the implementation of the government financial aid system for students should be accelerated. Thirdly, the government should speed up education reforms to ensure everyone has equal access to schools.

3.2022年12月大学英语四级作文万能模板

题目要求：

Directions: Write a composition entitled On Disasters. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 人的一生中，可能会遇到一些灾难事件，给我们的生活带来意外的打击。

2. 面对灾难，我们应该坚强，不要过于沉湎于悲痛，要积极面对人生。

3. 我的看法。

参考范文：

Sample:

On Disasters

An old saying goes: Life is full of roses and thorns. As we all know, one’s life is full of unexpected events, some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous. Those heavy blows, such as, floods, snowstorms, and earthquakes, threaten to weigh one down.

However、it’s even worse if one can’t drag himself out of the grief in that mental break-down is more serious than the disaster itself. Instead of indulging oneself in sadness, one should take positive attitude towards life and contribute to the reconstruction of his or her life and hometown.

As for me, if I am lucky enough to survive in a disaster, I will try my best to help those who are suffering by donation blood or money. If I am a victim, I will endeavor to recover from the sadness as soon as possible and be certain to be strong and supportive to the recovery work.