观点阐述四级作文范文 求现象分析型英语四级作文范文

范文来自《2010年6月英语四级作文考前预测范文》

预测作文(四)

Teenagers' Studying Abroad

1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学

2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的

3. 我认为这种观点是不对的

【范文】

Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

【点评】

第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法，之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因;第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见，然后分两点来阐述理由;最后一段进行总结，并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。

范文首句点题，指出青少年留学这一现象，并给出支持者的理由，即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈，而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。第二段给出反对理由。首先，早期独立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱，所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处，但令人担忧的问题也很多。

第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的机会做某事”。第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的，存有偏见的”;第三句中的aim at表示“目的在于”;第四句中的guarantee表示“保证”，adapt to表示“适应”，fierce表示“激烈的”，修饰competition(竞争)。

1. 本次大学英语四级考试的作文题目是考生在就业和创业之间进行选择，这是一个和大学生生活极为紧密的话题——大学毕业后的选择：工作还是创业，也是每个大学毕业仿扰生都会面临的选择题。

2. 构思本题可以从以下思路入手，首先开篇明确自己的选择;中间段落具体阐述自己做出这样选择的原因;结尾段说明无论哪一种选择本身并无对错之分。

3. 真题及参考范文如下：【题目】Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

4. 【参考范文】For undergraduates college students, deciding what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision to say the least. From my point of view, I prefer to launch a business. My choice can be attributed to the following two driving forces.

5. For one thing, I want to start my own business because I love do what I love. In my own business, I will be more than passionate to plan, organize and execute my favorite project.

6. For another thing, running my own business, I can accumulate rich experience, which is not only valuable to problem-solving but also critical to career development. While the risk of failing is real, what is important part is the lesson learned.

7. Actually, when in comes time for university graduates to decide their next step in life, there is no on right or wrong choice for everyone. Rather, each students must reach his or her own conclusion.

8. 【参考译文】For an undergraduate college student, deciding what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision. From my perspective, I prefer to start a business. My choice can be attributed to the following two reasons.

9. Firstly, I want to start my own business because I am passionate about what I love. In my own business, I will be more than enthusiastic to plan, organize, and execute my favorite projects.

10. Secondly, by running my own business, I can accumulate valuable experience, which is not only beneficial for problem-solving but also essential for career growth. Although the risk of failure is real, the important part is the lesson learned.

11. In fact, when it comes time for university graduates to decide their next step in life, there is no one-size-fits-all right or wrong choice. Rather, each student must come to their own conclusion.

12. 【范文解析】This year's CET-4 essay mainly focuses on the topic of "university graduates' choices" after graduation. The given topics either require students to choose between employment and entrepreneurship, further education and entrepreneurship, or employment in a state-owned enterprise and a joint venture. The instructions are clear: first, state your choice clearly; then, specifically explain the reasons for your choice. Therefore, the main task for students in the middle paragraph is to explain why they have made this choice.

13. The structure of the essay can be as follows:第一段: 描述话题。第二段: 表明观点+阐述原因。第三段: 观点结论。

大学英语四级作文写作，无论面对何种类型，都需精心构思和巧妙运用模板。让我们深入了解各类模版及其实战应用。

图表分析型

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首先，通过图表揭示数据变化，如：从__年到__年，数据显著增长/下降，如1990-2000间，学生电脑使用时间激增。

其次，突出关键数据点，如1990年仅为1小时，2000年达到历史高位20小时。

接着，剖析原因，如：电脑价格下降，学习需求增加，网络学习的高效性;示例：价格从高点跌落至平民化，网络课程的普及。

然后，总结这些因素的影响：价格和需求共同驱动了这一趋势。

个人见解可以是：虽然便利但需适度，防止过度依赖。

进一步阐述理由：例如，过度使用可能影响学习效率，引起其他问题。

最后，总结观点：科技进步是一把双刃剑，需明智利用。

对比论述型

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对立观点：关于______，有人持对立观点，认为__。

支持一方观点：其理由包括__，比如网络的开放性与交流能力的提升。

反驳理由：然而，反对者指出__，如过度依赖可能导致技能退化。

替代观点：实际上，平衡使用才是关键。

强化支持：有证据显示，适当使用能增强个人技能。

个人立场：我倾向于支持，因为__。

总结：平衡是解决问题的关键，不可忽视。

问题解决模板

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随着技术进步，__问题日益显现。

一方面，__带来的便利;另一方面，__的挑战。

解决方案：首先，__;其次，__;最后，__。

具体措施：例如，提高意识，提供培训，实施监管。

预期结果：这些策略有助于缓解问题。

实例阐述：如面试技巧提升，面试成功概率提高。

总结：解决问题需要多管齐下，确保长远和谐。

真题实战

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口语考试：支持者认为，它培养沟通能力，适应全球化社会。

反对者观点：过于关注可能导致学术忽视。

个人看法：应适度重视，以提升综合素养。

写作时，结合实例和恰当的模板，让你的观点条理清晰，更具说服力。不断磨炼，提高英语写作技巧，无疑是在四级考试中取得好成绩的基石。