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directions:
for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture
below. you should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and
comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. you should write at least 150
words but no more than 180 words.
“good news mom! i was accepted to the college of your choice.”
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parents’ role in their children’s growth
as is prescribed in the picture, the girl told her mother, “good news mom! i was accepted to the college of your choice.” we can infer that the mom chooses college for her child, but should the parents make such decision for their children? as far as i concerned, parents can give advice for their children instead of making decisions for them.
firstly, parents always want to give their children the best, however, they cannot completely understand their children’s interest and can’t sure what the most suitable is to their children. they just give their children what they consider the best, regardless of what their children want and what they like. so the best way to show your love is to respect children’s choice. secondly, the children should responsible for their own life. parents can company their children decades of years, but they cannot company their children’s whole life. parents can give their children advice, but teach their children to be independent is more important in their growth.
to sum up, parents can give their children advice, but they should respect their children’s choice. after all, children will grow up one day, and they must learn how to live independent and be responsible for their own life.
my father
one of my earliest memories of dad is that he would often leave the house at
dawn to go jogging.我对父亲最早的一些记忆之一是他以前常在黎明时离家去慢跑.
解说:a. memory n.记忆;记性, in memory of……为纪念……would often v 以前常常 one of,..之一c. at dawn 在黎明时,表时刻,介同用at, go jogging 去慢跑.表语从句.
he is a traditional chinese father,which means that he didn't show his affection
for his kids easily. 他是一个传统的中国父亲,这意味着他不轻易对儿女表露他的情感.
上列句中的which为关系代词,代替其前整个主句"he is atraditional chinese father" ,
which在所引导的定语从句中作主语,且which之前须加号. show one's affection for…对……表露某人的情感.
and he and i didn't talk much.some time ago, he made me go jogging with him.
而且我和他并不常交谈. 前一阵子,他叫我和他去慢跑
some time一段时间, make+人+动词原形 叫某人从事……
家长是否应该帮助孩子走向独立
有些家长替孩子包揽一切
为了帮孩子自立,家长应该
In our modern and contemporary society, whether parents should offer a helping hand to making their children independence has become a hot button. In other words, we cannot afford to lose sight of the trend that the kids’ independence has become a social focus, which triggers wide concerns across the nation, especially the parents. This tide does exist in our society.
In our society, a sizable portion of parents, especially the young parents, spoil their kids from all aspects. Spefically speaking, they help their children pile and clear up their school bags, wash their clothes, even socks. Besides, they also talk to their children “if only you succeed in your study, please leave anything to me”.
This prevalent tide sparks our deep thought. From my viewpoint, in an effort to reverse and eliminate this unfavorable trend mentioned above, considering the seriousness of this headache, Parents are supposed to teach their kids how to cope with a variety of complex siuations. In addition, parents also should take every opportunity to equip themselves with advanced educative knowledge and keep pace with the times and communicate with other parents who enjoys a wealth of educative experiences. In a word, We all hope that these children have less reliance on their parents and become independent economically and mentally.
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